Hi my name is Leonardo da Vinci, and I am an artist.
Leonardo was working on a painting called Mona Lisa.
Leonardo ran out of paint so he went down to the paint store. When he came back from
the paint shop as he went to put the paint away except for one on the shelf.
He bumped into the shelf and a magic potion fell off the shelf, and it landed
On the picture of Mona lisa. Leonardo looked at the picture the potion was covered
Everywhere. A second later the painting had smoke all around it.
Was the painting coming to life? It did Mona Lisa his painting came to life he was
Amazed. Mona Lisa said “ I want to become the next top model,” “ Why do you want to
Become the next top model?” said Leonardo “ Well, I always wanted to be a model” said
Mona Lisa. So they went to audition. She beat all the models, and made it to the top two
But she was against Phillip. Mona Lisa said “ I will never win this, I don’t have any
Clothes to.” Leonardo said, “ You can do this how about we go to the clothing shop,
And I will get you some cool clothes, so than you will have really cool outfits for the
Show. They both walked to the clothing shop. When they were there at the shop
Mona Lisa heard Phillip talking to himself and he said when I become the
Next top model I will destroy Moan lisa, and the other models too. “ Oh no.” said Mona
Lisa, “ What will I do.” She ran to Leonardo, thinking that
She needed some training. She would ask Leonardo, and when she asked him, Leonardo
Said that he would help.
As they worked hard day and night, finally that day came, “ let’s go do this! You
Can do it Mona Lisa.” Phillip and Mona Lisa were both nervous, but they had to do it.
They both started walking across the stage.
After they were finished modeling, the judges thought and they gave Phillip a
9, a 10, a 10 Mona Lisa got a 10, a 10, and a 10! MONA LISA WON!! She looked at
Phillip. He was disappointed. He gave her a mean look and walked away. Leonardo said,
“ I can’t believe you won the contest! Let’s go celebrate!!” ahhhhhhhhh “ What was that
Someone screamed,” Leonardo said then he turned around and FIRE. Mona Lisa and
Leonardo ran for the exit door Mona Lisa heard someone say Mona Lisa she turned
Around and Mona Lisa saw Phillip and Phillip said, “ I’M MELTING I’M MELTING
Tell my mother I love her.
By: Haley
Leonardo was working on a painting called Mona Lisa.
Leonardo ran out of paint so he went down to the paint store. When he came back from
the paint shop as he went to put the paint away except for one on the shelf.
He bumped into the shelf and a magic potion fell off the shelf, and it landed
On the picture of Mona lisa. Leonardo looked at the picture the potion was covered
Everywhere. A second later the painting had smoke all around it.
Was the painting coming to life? It did Mona Lisa his painting came to life he was
Amazed. Mona Lisa said “ I want to become the next top model,” “ Why do you want to
Become the next top model?” said Leonardo “ Well, I always wanted to be a model” said
Mona Lisa. So they went to audition. She beat all the models, and made it to the top two
But she was against Phillip. Mona Lisa said “ I will never win this, I don’t have any
Clothes to.” Leonardo said, “ You can do this how about we go to the clothing shop,
And I will get you some cool clothes, so than you will have really cool outfits for the
Show. They both walked to the clothing shop. When they were there at the shop
Mona Lisa heard Phillip talking to himself and he said when I become the
Next top model I will destroy Moan lisa, and the other models too. “ Oh no.” said Mona
Lisa, “ What will I do.” She ran to Leonardo, thinking that
She needed some training. She would ask Leonardo, and when she asked him, Leonardo
Said that he would help.
As they worked hard day and night, finally that day came, “ let’s go do this! You
Can do it Mona Lisa.” Phillip and Mona Lisa were both nervous, but they had to do it.
They both started walking across the stage.
After they were finished modeling, the judges thought and they gave Phillip a
9, a 10, a 10 Mona Lisa got a 10, a 10, and a 10! MONA LISA WON!! She looked at
Phillip. He was disappointed. He gave her a mean look and walked away. Leonardo said,
“ I can’t believe you won the contest! Let’s go celebrate!!” ahhhhhhhhh “ What was that
Someone screamed,” Leonardo said then he turned around and FIRE. Mona Lisa and
Leonardo ran for the exit door Mona Lisa heard someone say Mona Lisa she turned
Around and Mona Lisa saw Phillip and Phillip said, “ I’M MELTING I’M MELTING
Tell my mother I love her.
By: Haley
Edited by Jessica, Jacob, Jeffery
6 comments:
Great post! I'll bet the Mona Lisa was really a top model in her day. Phillip melting was funny as well.
I really liked the ending because of the I'm melting tell my mother I love her
Great job on adding a blog, you added everything you needed. But you will have to add who the editors of your story are! :)
I really loved your story, especially the part where phillip said, "I'm melting!Tell my mother I love her!" and Mona Lisa really won!
AWESOME STORY! I love the ending it was very origanal and creative. Good work!
Awsome Story Haley! I liked the ending when Philip melted. But the beginning was a little confusing, you started by saying you were Leonardo, then you were nararating him.
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