Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Water

Water, Water, Water
Water rushes by my toes
Fresh, cold, warm, or hot

By Haley

3 comments:

Ashton said...

Very good poem! It is very nice and I liked the title, it makes alot of sense! Good Work!

Anonymous said...

it makes sense and that u say the tempeture at the end

club4twins said...

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